Tuesday, February 10, 2009

Journal entry 4

So Angelina began to discuver fear. Fear, the man who devils with thoughts as he lurks behind the curtains of reality. If fear is hated by people then how is it that he can harbor hatred? He dodges intuition to contaminate actions. Dodges common sense in the face of threats, thus provoking false retaliation. He has been contaminating actions since danger threatened to become a threat. Now Angelina was liable to find one of his red daggers any day. She was scared too. Poor Brad! He does not deserve to deal with fear alone. She sent his friend Will to calm him but he broke down infront of his friend. Friends are meant for support but he was so fearful he nearly hurt Will. He would be calm as soon as he could reason through his toxic thoughts. He was calm though. Thats what he thought. But Will and Angelina could see into his now toxic mind and through that denial so they knew. And then if they didn't they soon would, for people began to be affected by his actions and the daggers started flying. People he had never met before saw fear in him. They too waited for the next dagger to be thrown and fear its resolve. Rumor, that cloaked assasin, had turned him toxic.

2 comments:

  1. I really like your rhetorical question in the third sentence and the way you used daggers in the paragraph.

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  2. Dude, that's a really nice post! (Discuver?)

    I like the way that you intertwined fear with hatred, for it's true, people afraid of rattlesnakes generally hate them as well. Also, the daggers and toxins are a great way for showing how fear can eventually erode the mind into such a point that the person eventually breaks down.

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